![]() I felt like Anna fell for James a bit too quickly, and there wasn’t quite enough tension between them. Then when they finally do meet up again, a lot more time could have been spent on their adventure together and build a much stronger relationship. We could have learned more about his background and what made him become a pirate, and show that although he is a pirate he is also a good guy. In the meantime, we also could have seen what James was up to on his deserted island and other conquests. ![]() I was hooked after the first chapter, and it would have been fun to travel with Anna throughout that year to see her prepare to captain her own ship as well as her other training. ![]() The skeleton of the story was great, and I felt a lot more time should have been spent on character and plot development. I just kept wishing throughout that this had been a full-blown novel. ![]() Since it was so short a lot was crammed in and unfortunately a lot of things were left out, such as character development. ![]()
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